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I think you just done broke the sun. It no shiny anymore! I hope you can fix it...
I find it amazing how chaotically evil this pleasantry is. If I'm being confusing, it's because you're being confusing. So many different size pieces at variable speeds falling from the broken moon. It's hard to make sense of, but I still know it all once came from the same floating object in the sky.
"Various pieces falling at varied sizes, all sharing the same lineage. This mesmerizing dance mimics the chaotic pattern that dappled the face of the satellite as it waltzed around our earth ages ago."
- unknown sorcerer
The song lacks audio dynamic. You've got a wave that looks like █████ instead of like ◄█◄►██► (if that makes sense). All the parts and instruments come together in a crafty demeanor. When the time is right, the solo takes center stage, but some of the key movements in the vocals get lost because they are too quiet in contrast.
Much like the picture, it makes me feel crowded. I don't like that feeling, but maybe that's a good thing because you were aiming right at my claustrophobia.
Indeed, the heavily-compressed drums are what makes it look like a brick. The vocals are also too quiet as I wasn't confident enough about them sounding as loud as they should. Learning to like your own voice is tough! Also, making crowded songs is my jam ;)
Caught my attention by surprise, and connected with me. But then a little over half way there was this distasteful sawtooth wave that threw me off balance.
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Do you have an instrument in mind that would be better fitting for that part? I feel like the past few years I made some... "questionable" choices regards which instruments to choose for each part, so I'd be happy to hear any suggestions
Amazing. The realism of the window shade is mesmerizing.
He looks like he is very in touch with his femonine side. Other than that, he looks smooth.
Age 33, Male
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Joined on 8/30/12
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